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Post by Harkovast on Apr 4, 2015 4:32:18 GMT
You can always cut out some of what they are saying if its not very interesting or goes on too long.
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Post by Harkovast on Apr 7, 2015 0:37:18 GMT
Just to clarify, becuase there is time between posts and people forget stuff (I know I do)
You decided to leave the exarchs wife while you went for reinforcements, right?
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Post by Horsie on Apr 7, 2015 0:39:53 GMT
I guess that was the plan.
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Post by Harkovast on Apr 7, 2015 0:56:41 GMT
Okay cool.
I will start planning for the next chapter, which should introduce some new characters.
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Post by Harkovast on Apr 12, 2015 0:39:59 GMT
I am working on chapter 3 at the minute. I am up to the start of scene 4 I think.
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Post by Canuovea on Apr 12, 2015 0:48:38 GMT
I got a bit farther with Chapter 4. Athanas is about to be introduced.
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Post by Harkovast on May 15, 2015 1:19:53 GMT
Damn it, I've fallen behind on this again!
I need to pick up the slack.
Unfortunatley I'm a bit busy athte minute...probably not this weekend, the weekend after I will get back to it and finish this chapter.
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Post by Canuovea on May 15, 2015 1:37:44 GMT
Hey, don't worry about it. We all get busy. I've been exceptionally busy the past couple months.
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Post by Harkovast on May 15, 2015 1:45:04 GMT
Busy....EARNING HARKOPOINTS!
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Post by Horsie on May 15, 2015 1:53:12 GMT
Once you get it posted there's a few bits of dialogue I want to change (this is the chapter where Konrad was a twat, right?). I'll have to go over some of it with you, Hark, and some stuff with Canuovea.
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Post by Harkovast on May 28, 2015 22:31:36 GMT
Done up to scene 6.
I changed it to make it so Alex doesn't try to kill a zadakine baker.
Konrad instead gives her a hard time about the explosion.
Alex gets more light hearted comedy dialogue.
New version of Alex is the funny one.
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Post by Harkovast on May 28, 2015 22:35:07 GMT
Also changed Hoof's target to Vy-Ko-Da, a character who shows up in the comic later.
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Post by Horsie on May 28, 2015 22:42:21 GMT
I forgot you were going through the chapters we already edited, glad you got rid of the exploding weasel, that was unnecessary.
I'll go through those chapters for spelling and grammar errors if I get a chance this weekend.
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Post by Harkovast on May 29, 2015 0:14:08 GMT
Yeah I haven't done any work on it for a while.
Too fucking busy!
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Post by Harkovast on Jun 24, 2015 16:56:32 GMT
I am editting chapter 3 of the story, and I am thinking about taking a lot of it out.
Its okay rpg chatting, but stuff about business deals with Konrad's relatives doesnt pay off at all in the actual rpg story so I feel like I should just cut it out.
It seems like a lot of the characters talking about stuff that isn't important that will probably just confuse the audience.
I'm also taking out a lot of Alex talking about Marcus' dead wife cause that just seems rude.
I am trying to make her more light hearted.
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