Read the rule book PDF

There's a lot of unnecessary or misplaced commas there.

As always, point out typos, get harko points.
(And soon Harko points will mean real world prizes!)

Yeah sorry about that!
You will be able to buy it in aprox 4 days as of writing this.

There have been a few changes as we made some additional improvements to how the game plays.

The rulebook is pretty much the same as was proofread on here ages ago, I just changed a few rules that got taken out and updated the pictures. I think the reason for the commas being strange is that a rulebook is an instruction manual, so doesn't flow like normal text. Instead it has a series of connected instructions, so commas are used more often than normal. I deferred to Canouvea and my dad (who does proofreading) on the grammar and stuff, so let me know if anything needs changing and I will fix it!

PAGE 3- "...Harkovast for two, three or four players" I would rather make use of the Oxford comma here personally, adding it after three. But if you don't like Oxford Commas, and think Stalin and JFK are strippers, then don't bother changing it. "Harkovast for two, three, or four players"



Same deal: "Nobility, Guile and Might." -> "Nobility, Guile, and Might."

Same deal: "Purchasing Champions, Regiments and Territories will aid players in this goal." -> "Purchasing Champions, Regiments, and Territories will aid players in this goal."

New Deal: "With each successful Challenge, players will accumulate Wealth and Power - the first player to achieve 12 Power will be victorious!" remove first comma -> "With each successful Challenge players will accumulate Wealth and Power - the first player to achieve 12 Power will be victorious!"

Remove Comma: "All across Harkovast, nations are mustering their strength to defeat their rivals" - "All across Harkovast nations are mustering their strength to defeat their rivals"

Remove Comma: "Perhaps you will dare to call on the mighty Wizards of Eldex to aid you, or pay the terrible price demanded by The King in the West to lend you his terrifying power."

Remove Comma: "After you are familiar with the game and feel comfortable with a more advanced version, you will want to start playing with these rules."

Note, seem to be using - like a semi-colon. That's fine.

PAGE 4-Add a comma "The strength the Unit has in Nobility, Guile(,) and/or Might (see page 12)."

Add a comma "These symbols are referenced by other Units, Territories(,) and Challenges."

Add a comma "Champion, Regiment(,) or Territory."


I think that's about it for now since I'm tired and don't know if the lack of the Oxford Comma is deliberate or not. If it isn't, well, almost all lists encountered so far seem to lack it. If it is... then fine.

Yeah, it has been consistently not-Oxford. So you're probably fine.