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Post by StyxD on Jan 18, 2022 21:55:57 GMT
The Cerberus have some really interesting design. Three tails is a nice nod to their, well, cerberus-ness, when the heads work in a completely different way. They're also probably required to make them stand out from those werewolves.
And it's interesting to think how such a creature would live.
(I see that if it aired in the 90s, it would've been one of those gateway furry series, wouldn't it?)
So, it also suggests that there's this place called Underworld, and some of the episodes should probably take place there, eh?
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Post by Harkovast on Jan 19, 2022 1:35:14 GMT
Remember to PM me if you want to read the script to episode 1.
Fun fact- Werewolves are not vulnerable to silver. However, they can't eat chocolate.
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Post by Harkovast on Jan 19, 2022 19:26:44 GMT
This show would be very gate way furry. All the women have hips for days and crazy thighs. That wasn't planned when I started, it just sort of worked out that way.
And Edge himself is a smouldering, brooding bad ass so there is something for everyone.
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Post by StyxD on Jan 19, 2022 21:21:55 GMT
All the women have hips for days and crazy thighs. That wasn't planned when I started, it just sort of worked out that way. And here I thought this was intentional for contrast to the straight-lined style.
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Post by Harkovast on Jan 20, 2022 0:50:34 GMT
It developed organically. The women are definitely a lot less angular than the men. The women's thighs in the angular style didn't work at all. Debbie is the least angular. She is all curves. It was at the bottom of the last page, but I posted a picture of Silk in case you missed it. She is one of the most angular females . I like the stylised look though. That works well.
I need to start writing episode 2 (Which is the second part of "The Lone Wolf".)
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Post by Harkovast on Jan 23, 2022 21:55:41 GMT
The Durand Crime family. In the middle is Hugo Durand. He is the biggest crime boss in Eclipse City, controlling much of the human and none supernatural crime in the city. Hugo Durand worked his way up from the streets, becoming the most powerful figure in the criminal world in the city. He has many corrupt judges, police and politicians on his pay roll. He often works for Remus, who provides him with money for his help and makes sure the authorities over look many of his activities. His wife is Tiana Durand. She is a trophy wife, concerned with making herself attractive and doting over her beloved son, who she has always spoiled rotten. She will commonly complain to her husband that something is "Upsetting junior!" She doesn't directly run anything in the business, but is aware of where the money is coming from that supports her life style but doesn't care. Behind Hugo Durand is his and Tiana's son, Hugo Durand Junior. Unlike his father, Junior never had to work his way up or achieve anything himself, and had everything handed to him. He is a bully and a jerk but lacks much ability. He is arrogant, but not especially bright and quite cowardly when put on the spot. He is more comfortable beating up people weaker than him, or when he has his fathers goons backing him up. Otherwise he would probably run away screaming for help! He often complains to his father about anyone he feels is showing the family "disrespect!" And will commonly be saying something like "Pops, they're disrespecting us! We can't stand for this!"
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Post by Canuovea on Jan 23, 2022 22:31:56 GMT
Ah yes, isn't it commonly how it works? A strong leader achieves much, but then their kids end up privileged and useless.
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Post by Harkovast on Jan 24, 2022 13:10:04 GMT
I added a load more episode ideas. There are quite a lot now.
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Post by Harkovast on Jan 26, 2022 23:02:22 GMT
So, Episode 1 and 2 were going to be a 2 parter (The Lone Wolf, 1 and 2).
However, it turned out the story was just so XTREME that 2 parts were not enough. So now it will be a THREE part adventure.
Part 1 and 2 are written (though I might need to edit part 2 some more.)
I can say with confidence that this has caused the final battle to become over 500% more xtreme and the story arc will now have more villains, more explosions and more raw hamburger meat.
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Post by Harkovast on Jan 27, 2022 10:27:04 GMT
I updated Queen Katalatep's art to make her face look better.
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Post by Harkovast on Jan 28, 2022 20:49:49 GMT
Razor is a cyborg clone of Edge, made using a combination of science and magic. Initially he appears identical to Edge, but rebuilds himself to be bigger and more powerful and calls himself Razor. He has some of Edges memories, but they are broad and vague. So even though he is more powerful in many ways, he lacks Edge's cleverness and experience. Razor is obsessed with defeating Edge and proving himself the superior werewolf. However, Amanda starts to think he might not be evil, just confused because of his strange origins and perhaps he just needs someone to mentor him...
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Post by zaealix on Jan 30, 2022 5:41:37 GMT
...Razor looks dumb to me. I think it's partially him going for beefing up his cybernetics for more power when part of the point was to invisibly replace Edge instead. Maybe it's something in the way his face looks in wolf mode... And the idea of having Edge's memories but as a jumbled mess can't do good things for his ability to figure himself out! He just seems lacking in the brains department. Not that I think his design is bad!
... Part of me wonders how Edge would have reacted if it was a cyborg Silk instead. Even if she was confused enough to lean hard into the cyborg style for some reason or another.
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Post by TempestFennac on Jan 30, 2022 14:36:07 GMT
Cyborg Silk seems like it would mess Edge up a lot considering the possibility that the antagonists somehow gained access to a part of her to create it.
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Post by Harkovast on Jan 30, 2022 14:36:07 GMT
Well that's good because Razor IS dumb. He's not a drooling idiot, but he's not very smart and has a pretty limited knowledge of things. He was created with technical knowledge to repair himself, but otherwise he's not super bright. He's sort of the big lug archetype. He comes up with plans but they generally aren't very good...though he's still a threat by virtue of his physical power and weapons.
He opts to become bigger and with more fire power to try to prove himself superior to Edge because he doesn't have an understanding of what being a werewolf is actually about.
He's confused and troubled, but some of Edge's good qualities may be in him as well, so he may not be beyond redemption. When not directly fighting him, Edge views him as a complete idiot, not at all a real werewolf and generally very irritating. He's a knock off made in a test tube in Edge's view, at least initially. Amanda is more sympathetic to him.
Razor "I've realised that I shouldn't be imitating you! I am SUPERIOR to you! More powerful than you will ever be! I am no longer called Edge, you can call me...RAZOR!"
Edge "I'm not calling you that."
Razor "Huh?"
Edge "That's the stupidest name I've ever heard. No way. Edge and Razor? Seriously? I'm not doing it."
Razor "Arrrgh! I'm going to destroy you!"
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Post by TempestFennac on Jan 30, 2022 14:37:48 GMT
Lol. Edge's reaction is justified.
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