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Post by Canuovea on May 6, 2016 21:59:35 GMT
Such is not a healthy relationship. At all. Even if it might once have been, that's just bad. Made worse by the inability to actually communicate his situation and how he's feeling.
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Post by Tech on May 6, 2016 22:14:03 GMT
yeah I thought the idea of a helpless man stuck in a relationship with a murdering psychopath would be fun to write. Molly of corse not seeing anything wrong with what she does and genuinely caring for the only person to ever care for her. while Kyle in contras is dealing with fears of death, the person he thought he knew becoming a monster. trapped as it were
the first real introduction I have planned out is Kyle on a date. The Creeper (Molly) is thought to be dead and he's finally slowly moving on, he's free and can hopefully live normally. he leaves his date actually feeling happy till he gets home to his apartment and Molly is there. she's of corse happy to see him and Kyle does his best to fake it. He'd moved, was in a new area and had found someone new and yet here was his fears to pull him back.
doing his his best to avoid Molly's sexual approaches he says he's tried and needs sleep. going to his room he sees all the food he had in his freezer on the floor. crying he opens the freeze to the dead body of the girl he's been dating. Molly coming in "well you didn't need her anymore now that I'm back" Kyle crying hard "of corse, I only ever need you Molly" Molly "why are you crying?" Kyle lying "I just missed you so much"
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Post by Canuovea on May 6, 2016 22:35:49 GMT
That is just all around frightening.
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Post by Tech on May 6, 2016 22:37:35 GMT
willing to elaborate Can?
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Post by Canuovea on May 6, 2016 22:40:40 GMT
Well, as a relationship, that is just terrifying.
How long until Kyle flips out? Or just becomes completely depressed?
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Post by Tech on May 6, 2016 22:45:06 GMT
he already is depressed for sure. I think anothe interesting thing for their relationship is she's not abusive. she's caring to him, cooks, cleans. never threatens him or anything like that. his fears stem from what she does to other people rather then what she does to him.
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Post by Canuovea on May 6, 2016 22:47:33 GMT
Well, eventually he may become depressed to the point where he doesn't actually care if she kills him or not. At that point, he won't be able to hide how terrified or at least how horrified he is.
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Post by Tech on May 6, 2016 22:50:17 GMT
maybe he will maybe he won't. it's amazing what people are willing to take just to live.
maybe she wouldn't even actually kill him no mater what. she gives no indication of even a willingness to inflict harm on him
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Post by Canuovea on May 6, 2016 22:54:25 GMT
Yeah. She's clearly lacking in the empathy department too, as she'd probably have been able to figure out what it might be like for him in this situation. That doesn't mean she's necessarily a bad person (well, that's the whole 'murdering' people thing) but it really puts poor Kyle in a bad spot.
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Post by Tech on May 6, 2016 23:00:04 GMT
oh yeah for sure. she doesn't see what she does as a negative and believes her and Kyle are happy together. these two and their "relationship" is definitely one of the more interesting aspects in the story
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Post by Tech on May 6, 2016 23:02:34 GMT
being with the perfect person who loves and genuinely cares for you above all else but also seeing them on the news "Creeper murders whole orphanage, children hanging from intestines". sleeping next to someone like that would not be easy
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Post by Canuovea on May 6, 2016 23:13:14 GMT
If he knew she genuinely cared for him... he might think that he could actually talk to her about his concerns. But she's a murdering maniac, so he can't actually be sure about why she keeps him around.
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Post by Tech on May 6, 2016 23:19:20 GMT
yup, he's kinda stuck as it were.
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Post by Tech on May 6, 2016 23:29:35 GMT
thanks for taking the time to hear about all this so far by the way. glad someone on this forum is actually willing to talk to me about stuff
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Post by Canuovea on May 6, 2016 23:33:23 GMT
No problem, I'm pretty good at listening. And this is interesting.
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